The darkness is drifting slowly away
and made her alarmed in sleep
and dismay.
Dreams that made her charms
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How tender and smooth a expression As seems to spread the fragrance to seren the heart like Rose Petals. Love it greatly.
beautiful piece! amazing imagery... very nice feeling...
Wow! Gulshen, I didn't know you had it in you : D Excelently written with a Beautifullly flow.
well-written, loved the rhyme and imagery of the words...
Lyrical charm and superseding weight of good diction make this write a fine one.
So romantic, delicate and fragile with superb imagery, just beautiful!
Beautiful description Gulsher. comparison of cheeks with petals..... Superb. I loved the end.... Again a beautiful comparison and both the lines go nicely with each other. To hold them close As petals of rose Beautiful. I liked you started the poem in a slow flow and the flow caught pace as the passion and emotion raised. Beaitiful
beautiful.....i am lost for words this is the most romantic poem sir..amazing
Sweet smell rose to your nose, it really teach you a thing, be something that nice and adorable, may you like a rose, or smell like a rose..thorn less however...a sweet write and really enjoyable one Gulsher_Soul
Great John, you have talent, I must admit.