Saturday, December 22, 2012

Rose Petals Comments

Rating: 4.7

The darkness is drifting slowly away
and made her alarmed in sleep
and dismay.
Dreams that made her charms
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Xelam Kan™
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Ciarli Ling 03 February 2013

Great John, you have talent, I must admit.

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Kanav Justa 17 January 2013

very beautiful poem, , , , loved it, , ,

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Vivek Tiwari 04 January 2013

How tender and smooth a expression As seems to spread the fragrance to seren the heart like Rose Petals. Love it greatly.

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Kavya . 03 January 2013

v nice..simple soothing poem as soft as touch of a rose petal

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Shivani Misra 03 January 2013

Beautiful one and i love the title :) keep Sharing.

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 30 December 2012

beautiful piece! amazing imagery... very nice feeling...

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Persian Khushi 28 December 2012

Wow! Gulshen, I didn't know you had it in you : D Excelently written with a Beautifullly flow.

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Zeenat Fatima 28 December 2012

beautiful poem.. Lovely!

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Kandi Behagg 27 December 2012

Great writting! ! ! ! So Beautiful! ! ! ! ! !

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Howard Johnson 23 December 2012

Thanks for sharing your penning

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Howard Johnson 23 December 2012

Enjoyable and fun to read

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Monciana Edmondson 23 December 2012

well-written, loved the rhyme and imagery of the words...

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Lyrical charm and superseding weight of good diction make this write a fine one.

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Hazel Durham 22 December 2012

So romantic, delicate and fragile with superb imagery, just beautiful!

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Fatima Fatimzahra 22 December 2012

very sensitively, nice and lovely

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Bright Morn 22 December 2012

Beautifuoooootiful, made me speechless

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Jahan Zeb 22 December 2012

Beautiful description Gulsher. comparison of cheeks with petals..... Superb. I loved the end.... Again a beautiful comparison and both the lines go nicely with each other. To hold them close As petals of rose Beautiful. I liked you started the poem in a slow flow and the flow caught pace as the passion and emotion raised. Beaitiful

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Payal Parande 22 December 2012

beautiful.....i am lost for words this is the most romantic poem sir..amazing

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Unwritten Soul 22 December 2012

Sweet smell rose to your nose, it really teach you a thing, be something that nice and adorable, may you like a rose, or smell like a rose..thorn less however...a sweet write and really enjoyable one Gulsher_Soul

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