Wednesday, August 1, 2012

Rose Of The Sun Comments

Rating: 5.0

From where the sun rises,
As black as charcoal
A veil in heaven covers
The glowing face in the sky,
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Pheko Motaung 15 August 2012

Fabulous poem! Only you is in control of such outstanding marvelous writing.You're the best.Thank you

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Romeo Della Valle 06 August 2012

Excellent! Beauty and Talent magically blended in this nice flowing and well crafted write! 10+++ Thank for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Romeo -New York City

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 04 August 2012

he he! this poem is a bridge to my nature! also it's tone is same as my poem, a road of sundown! nice one!

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 04 August 2012

Your wording is amazing lil sister, the poem is a masterpice...realy loved it sisi.keep up the good work.. Siya__! !

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Captain Cur 03 August 2012

Beautifully written, I loved every word. Very inspirational.

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