Wednesday, March 27, 2019

Rose Marie Juan-Austin Comments

Rating: 5.0

Rhyming I see you.
O rose of pink colours,
soul's beauty in your fragrance
ecstatic I see the whole world is.
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Akhtar Jawad
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A gorgeous poem on Poetess Rose Marie Juan Austin. Acrostic poem that rhymes with the beauty of the soul. When the inner core of the heart is beautiful, the whole world is beautiful too. A most deserving and wonderful poem, Akhtar Sahab.....10

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Sylvia Frances Chan 31 March 2019

My Great Compliments, Akhtar Sir for this captivating Acrostic poem. May God grant Rose Marie aka Mrs. Juan-Austin a long and healthy life. You have superbly worded this gorgeous poem into a Beautiful Acrostic God's Blessings in Abundance for thee and thy beloved family. Amen. a 10++++++++++++++++++++ for the ratings/ Vote

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Sylvia Frances Chan 31 March 2019

And I see your poems are erasing ugliness of hate selfish nationalism terror and proxy wars. Insight of a poetess like you needs the whole world to be beautiful once again. You are quite right when you wrote here that her poems are erasing ugliness of hate. She represents Beauty-self

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Sylvia Frances Chan 31 March 2019

Join the whole world Europe, Africa, Australia America and Asia. Nightingales everywhere will sing for you. Your beautiful imaginations know no bounds, Sir! Loveliest!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 31 March 2019

Make it up all that I see is ugly, rusted beliefs, ideologies stale, evolutionary are your revolutionary rhymes Those revolutionary rhymes, we could all read in her Absolute Power poem POTD recently, WOW! Amazing!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 31 March 2019

I cite these lines from your beautiful and fascinating poem, Akhtar Sir Rhyming I see you. O rose of pink colours, soul's beauty in your fragrance ecstatic I see the whole world is........ A powerful start of the poem about the great poetess and always elegant, indeed most suitable colour that Pink colour. You have mentioned that in my tribute to her.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 March 2019

I am deeply honored and humbled by the wonderful comments of Robert M. Smith and.Dr. Dillip Swain.They also gave me inspiration in all my Poetry works.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 March 2019

Beautifully written poem. A poem that I will cherish more than life.itself. Thank you, Sir Akhtar You made my stay here at Poem Hunter great and wonderful. I want to take this opportunity that your comment on my poem " Your Love Is Like The Briefness. of Tulips had.been imbibed in my mind like a mantra that instigate me to strive and write poems of value. A million thanks again and.may you be blessed with all the joys that life brings...I wish you nothing but the best in life.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 March 2019

In my entire stay here at Poem Hunter, I have always look up to you as a great man who can tame the wind.. You have maintained your calmness and composure amid the roughness of the sea.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 March 2019

" And I see your poems are erasing Ugliness of hate, selfish nationalism terror and.proxy wars Insight of.a.poetess.like you needs the. whole world to be beautiful once again." Beautiful lines from a wonderful poem. For a great man, great poet and.philosopher to say these words meant a lot to me.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 March 2019

The ultimate stanza of this poem touches the.core of my heart And I cried when I read it. You have given an answer to my ultimate dream in life. There is nothing I can ask more. If there is one that I can touch through my poetry, than the purpose of writing had been served..

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 March 2019

There is no greater satisfaction than to receive a wonderful comment due to a work you have done. But to be put in a beautiful poem is mind blowing. I came here on this site unarmed, without any single attribute of a Poet. Poetry was foreign to me. I relied purely on.my heart and wit that I could someday make one poem. The death of.my father fueled.me to write Poetry.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 March 2019

Wow, what a wonderful poem, Sir Akhtar. One of the best poems I have ever read. It is.not that the poem was written for me but because of its beauty and the universal and meaningful message that have been embedded in this tribute. I concur with Khalida Bano Ali's wonderful comment.

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Khalida Bano Ali 27 March 2019

It's not merely a gratitude to a contemporary great poetess. The poem has a message with universal appeal.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 March 2019

She is a wonderful poetess and a brilliant reviewer and a true asset to Poem Hunter! Sir, you have put spotlight on a right person!

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