Saturday, July 10, 2021
Rose & Jasmine Say Together It Is Nice Comments
Rating: ★4.5
Rose and Jasmine grace the garden
with their pink and white shades
Cuckoo like song birds sing their praise
Flowers enjoy the song and nod their heads in breeze
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7/30/2025 12:24:38 AM # 1.0.0
This is not bad. I feel the last two verses are out place here. One has the word nice which does not explain much. Try using one more descriptive. The verse before the last comes too abrupt and forceful and spoils a bit the harmony of the poem and the flow of the logic or sweet connection of it