Rose and Jasmine grace the garden with their pink and white shades Cuckoo like song birds sing their praise Flowers enjoy the song and nod their heads in breeze
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This is not bad. I feel the last two verses are out place here. One has the word nice which does not explain much. Try using one more descriptive. The verse before the last comes too abrupt and forceful and spoils a bit the harmony of the poem and the flow of the logic or sweet connection of it
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This is not bad. I feel the last two verses are out place here. One has the word nice which does not explain much. Try using one more descriptive. The verse before the last comes too abrupt and forceful and spoils a bit the harmony of the poem and the flow of the logic or sweet connection of it