Yellow rose buds she requested for her senior prom
Talked about how they would match a satin dress
Did not know where the roses would come from
And, as a young girl of ten, it was anyone's guess.
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i've not been on PH much in months, mostly due to the difficulties i've encountered when trying to use some of its features. But this week i've seen some real good improvements.
Milt, Ist stanza: i don't understand reference to young girl of ten. Otherwise i found this poem pretty outstanding, like most of mine! ! Fine rhyming.
Milt, 'For a waiting room full of anxiously awaiting fathers'? ? ? ? Were there four fathers? ?
I 'fear' PH will never be as user-friendly as it was six months ago and for years before then, but i've found i'm finally able to use some features previously not working for me. Best wishes. Thanks for the poem. bri : )