Thursday, October 19, 2006

Rose (A Haiku) Comments

Rating: 5.0

A long-stemmed red rose
Swaying and spreading sweet smell
Oblivious of thorns.
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asma bahrainwala
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Malini Kadir 20 March 2008

Superb..................haiku!

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Mark Earls 15 November 2006

Wonderful image, and I like the thorn reference. Perfect!

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Reuben Matthew 06 November 2006

this one is good too. i like all your poems. Reuben.

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Joshua Fegley 19 October 2006

A magnificent Haiku Asma. Laters....Joshua.

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