Thursday, December 29, 2005

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The Gun went off
She fell into the abyss I promised I'd never let her fall into.
I failed her
Could'nt save her this time
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Byron Cornell Ford II
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Ashka Pandya 29 December 2005

a very good poem...gets 10 from smiling ASHKA

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