Rose Comments

this is amzing! love this poem

A very pretty poem, I can just picture the whole image in my head so perfectly. Great job. :)

a very nice flow of verses...good write and great... Ency Bearis

Melanie, I really liked this. I enjoy how it moved along and the images that came to mind as I read it. I gave it a 10 and I wouldnt do it unless I though it was worth it. Much of the time I really dont get it when it comes to poetry, but this is beautiful. Have a look at one of mine if you get a chance.