Sunday, October 5, 2014

Rose Comments

Rating: 5.0

Many are the gardens,
so many are the flowers,
with color and fragrance.
I was looking for a rose!
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Akhtar Jawad
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Khalid Saifullah 20 November 2017

Simply beautiful, what a gift! ........................................................................

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Paul Sebastian 14 October 2014

The rose bud must have blushed and shied away when it was kissed! What an engrossing poem! ! I loved it. You have painted a beautiful picture of youth. Great write!

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Ramesh Rai 10 October 2014

All over the night, That slept in moonlight, A sleep so deep, That when the winds, Removed the leaves, And saw her beauty, Open and exposed, The wind was wet. A soothing poem. Enjoyed the read.

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Geetha Jayakumar 07 October 2014

Belated Greetings! ! ....Happy Eid. This is one of the beautiful gift to be presented to your beloved wife. Fantastic flow of words, which make this Rose Lovely and Special one!

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Geetha Jayakumar 07 October 2014

Belated Greetings! ....Happy Eid. This is one of the beautiful gift to be presented to your beloved wife. Fantastic flow of words, which make this Rose Lovely!

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Salini Nair 07 October 2014

I saw that bud, In an isolated corner, Shying and hiding, The outcome of nature, ...........................beautiful poem on rose

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Savita Tyagi 06 October 2014

Beautiful poem that makes a lovely gift to your lovely wife. She must be very pleased. Wish you both a very happy Eid.

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Khalida Bano Ali 06 October 2014

A beautiful poem or a rose both are lovely gifts.

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Valsa George 06 October 2014

So you were looking for the prettiest rose to be gifted with love to your sweet heart on Eid! I am sure she might be mighty pleased to see her Romeo approaching her with a lovely rose! Enjoyed!

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Akhtar Jawad 05 October 2014

A Eid gift to my sweet heart wife. Happy Eid Mubarak.

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