Monday, March 10, 2014

Rose Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am a symbol
of the red-hot fire
burning in your heart.
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Maya Hanson
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Daniel Y. 10 March 2014

A charged, emotional poem. Good pace, word choice, and metaphors. It's meaning is not entirely clear to me. The cycle of lives, the red against the omnipresent grey, is this a cycle of bad relationships and good experiences? I liked this poem, please read one of mine.

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Colleen Courtney 10 March 2014

A wonderful take on what a flower sees, feels, thinks. Never gave it a thought before. Great vision!

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Maya Hanson

Fenton, MO
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