Sunday, February 26, 2012

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When you look at me my Darling;
Do you see the lady of your dream or a mere fantasy?
Distant, so far to reach;
Hair falling at the shoulders, caressing, seductively.
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MARY PAGDATI
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Chinedu Dike 12 December 2019

Rich in description and vivavivac with emotions. A beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing.

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Anil Kumar Panda 24 March 2012

very nice.flow, wordplay is beautiful. work of a genius.

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Madan M 26 February 2012

You taste of ocean, avenues of grassy dunes, like a magician you pluck a tiny pebble see these lines, here this poetess writes soul toch the sea from my hair-

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