Write my name in your heart with ink of love
Make your mind a mosque when my life turns tough
Keep my videos in your brain's hard disk
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I kept smiling when I was reading this poem, the rhyme, the words, and the thought they represent are hearty. Nice Asif, I like this poem especially as it displays the expression of love.
I just read your poem. Thought you are a romantic man..., you described about love with common things. thank's a lot for send me your invite email... And I'll read the others of your poem....
Make your mind a mosque when my life turns tough, , well said asif
This poem has a good sense of rhyme and flows well. A lovely poem about love
This is brilliant with great rhythm and flow, I loved this poem, just perfect. Thanks for sharing!
its really beautifully written. the graphic imagery is nice. i adore the comapring or liking part of the whole poem. the tune and melody is very rhythmic.its really beautiful poem.
Lovely poem.Some great imagery.Well constructed and written in plain language- the language of love.
Hello Asif Thanks for your message. Enjoyed your poem - well written and very expressive. I submitted a poem called 'Words On Fire' today - perhaps you might enjoy reading it
Some parts of this poem are a bit entertaining and at the same time a touch of romance.. Wonderful.. Keep it up.
Nice write my friend. Gently romantic with some good metaphors.
Nice write my friend. Gently romantic with some good metaphors.
That was so sweet! I loved the line Put out with your kiss my desire's flames. Buetifally put!
The structure and rhymes are very well constructed in lovely romantic poem Well done