Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
Friday, November 16, 2012

Rosary Of Love Comments

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Write my name in your heart with ink of love
Make your mind a mosque when my life turns tough

Keep my videos in your brain's hard disk
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Asif Andalib
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Hans Vr 18 November 2012

The structure and rhymes are very well constructed in lovely romantic poem Well done

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Onyeme John 18 November 2012

I kept smiling when I was reading this poem, the rhyme, the words, and the thought they represent are hearty. Nice Asif, I like this poem especially as it displays the expression of love.

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Anne Dahliana 17 November 2012

I just read your poem. Thought you are a romantic man..., you described about love with common things. thank's a lot for send me your invite email... And I'll read the others of your poem....

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Akram Saqib 17 November 2012

Make your mind a mosque when my life turns tough, , well said asif

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P.j. Reed 17 November 2012

This poem has a good sense of rhyme and flows well. A lovely poem about love

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Hazel Durham 17 November 2012

This is brilliant with great rhythm and flow, I loved this poem, just perfect. Thanks for sharing!

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Peter Maxharya 17 November 2012

Wooow im enjoying reading this masterpiece

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Tanveer Sharma 17 November 2012

aaaaaaaaawww it is so amazing. enjoyed reading it :)

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Young Church Poetry 17 November 2012

Wow! your work is beautiful and amazing.

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 17 November 2012

its really beautifully written. the graphic imagery is nice. i adore the comapring or liking part of the whole poem. the tune and melody is very rhythmic.its really beautiful poem.

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 17 November 2012

your heart print, thanks for sharing

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Matt Mooney 16 November 2012

Lovely poem.Some great imagery.Well constructed and written in plain language- the language of love.

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Vipins Puthooran 16 November 2012

rosary of love/beautiful! ! ! ! A good poem

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Ken Kerr 16 November 2012

Hello Asif Thanks for your message. Enjoyed your poem - well written and very expressive. I submitted a poem called 'Words On Fire' today - perhaps you might enjoy reading it

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Shivani Misra 16 November 2012

Some parts of this poem are a bit entertaining and at the same time a touch of romance.. Wonderful.. Keep it up.

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Stevie Taite 16 November 2012

Nice write my friend. Gently romantic with some good metaphors.

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Stevie Taite 16 November 2012

Nice write my friend. Gently romantic with some good metaphors.

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That was so sweet! I loved the line Put out with your kiss my desire's flames. Buetifally put!

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Steve Yeager 16 November 2012

I really like this poem and it's funny. ~Steve

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Sarojini Pattayat 16 November 2012

a nice poem.Best wishes.

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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