Saturday, September 30, 2006

Rosa Della Morte Comments

Rating: 5.0

Love is the brightest pink of the purest pink rose
and the softest music played from afar.
Its taste is as sweet as chocolate-covered strawberries.
It smells like the air after a fresh rainstorm
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Kailee Williams
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Original Unknown Girl 03 October 2006

Wow Kailee, this is very profound. Are you sure you haven't been here before? I'm not sure I could've written this at 14! Well Done! My only constructive comment would be that love should never make you feel frigid! ! Apart from that it's a 9/10! ! Great write! HG

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Kelly Allen Vinal 01 October 2006

Dark, dark, dark. Brilliant work, Kailee - just brilliant!

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Kailee Williams

Kailee Williams

Clarion, Iowa
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