Tuesday, February 5, 2008

Rope Burn. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Clutch me, wrap your arms around my body, tight, like rope burn
Foreheads mushed together, red, everyone said this'd hurt
And while we're breathing together, sharing the same rhythm
It's like I've let the pieces of me go on sudden exhibition -
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Mary Gordley 06 February 2008

Dang Kim, it's a lively and fun write. Thanks.

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Powerful, rough poetry that speaks of strong, physical love.

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Kim Dang

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