Saturday, June 3, 2017

Roots Comments

Rating: 5.0

The world is so polluted
With mental and real soot,
With hate and murder
Violence, silence,
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Sandra Feldman
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Pamela Sinicrope 03 June 2017

soot- mental and real have polluted our Earth....I could not agree more. You've expressed what I've been feeling in these trying times. I have hope for our humanity...on an individual scale, I can see the possibilities, but when I look at the whole, the picture becomes muddled. Wonderful write my dear sister. Take care.

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Sandra Feldman 09 June 2017

I am less optimistic than you. Seems the more we progress technically the farther back we go, humanly. I am extremely disappointed and saddened by the never ending conflict among governments and individuals as the United Nations rakes in fortunes but does nothing for poverty or peace. Thanks so much for your comment, we do communicate, my sister.

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Theodora Onken 03 June 2017

Sandra - love this! A poem filled with nothing but the truth! ! ! Oh, how so many continue to pollute this earth and all of it's once beauty...filling it with the ugly of hatred, lies, victimization, violence, breaking it with their rage. It's just outside our door waiting for a chance to come in....to trespass on our God given castles - our peace of mind - our love....hoping to destroy any of the good that is left! This is a 10+++++++++++ More please dear poetess.

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Sandra Feldman 09 June 2017

I know that denouncing won't right the wrongs. But may cause a little hope in the tapestry of evil that is our society. I appreciate your words very much. So encouraging! thank you

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Laurie Van Der Hart 03 June 2017

Very powerful poem, Sandra. People without truth - that's the root of it.

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