Monday, June 23, 2008

Rootless Comments

Rating: 5.0

Swept away on the ebbing tide
I long to stay but I must go
my wanderlust unsatisfied.
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ivor or ivor.e hogg
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Marvin Brato 23 June 2008

Somehow it hurts to leave someone you had spent special moments, but then there the guilt feeling is release when leaving is not of your own desire but hers! A 10.

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John Thorkild Ellison 23 June 2008

I like this very much. It's very well expressed and evocative. Well done! !

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