Wednesday, July 21, 2010

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Clouds pinched in the squeeze
above harvester hollow
quake those placid trees
to gulp each precious swallow
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John Weber
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James Lagoski 21 July 2010

Dear John, I found your rhyme scheme here to be intriging and interesting, I guess a good word would be 'Enlightening' LOL You've made the AA-BB connection work well! Peace~ James

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