Thursday, January 31, 2008

Rooms In My Mind Comments

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I'm drawn by the spirits
Of long-ago souls
To stairwells that spiral
Through claustraphobic holes
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jane solanrobertson
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Mary Gordley 31 January 2008

Very nice handling of an interesting metaphor. Thanks.

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Ann Beard 31 January 2008

Well done. the mind is a world of its own. I love the flow of this poem.

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jane solanrobertson

jane solanrobertson

warrington, england
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