Thursday, September 5, 2013

Room With A View Comments

Rating: 4.3

Chocolate brown buildings
Cast out shadows
On the bright day
The landscape of our healing
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Tom Squires
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Hazel Durham 24 December 2017

I love the simplicity of this superb write and the powerful message of hope is everywhere even in the city with all it's glare, gritty and beauty can still be found! !

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Howard Savage 19 January 2016

This is a strong poem with a profound metaphor.

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Noreen Carden 07 May 2014

Hello Tom you paint a very clear picture so the reader feels as though they are seeing through your eyes

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Susan Lacovara 05 September 2013

Could just about see it for myself...lovely images...beautiful text. Found your work to be comforting and creative.

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