Room Hope For My Beloved Comments
Longing wings, gone and passed
Weak flapping, will go to pile the sense?
In an obstacles range, will not be lost
Although not one promise, keep eternal - definitely
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I think love must be described in that way, simple, sincere and strong. Very good, your Lady must be happy poet! !
Love kindles the imagination and such beautiful lines are created. Fireflies in the dark and morning silhouettes are beautiful images.
This is a lovely poem. Love always do wonders. It is soulful. It is musical. It is hope.
Like the rainbow, you had been chosen Morning's silhouette, iridescent No regrets, despite not being Because loving you is greatest gift - my beloved lady very nice poem.
Nothing matters when one is deeply in love! That's why it is often said 'love is blind'! A very passionate write! ! Enjoyed! !
a beautiful love poem. the last stanza is a perfect ending to your love poem. 10
A love so deep and true it lights up the night like fire flies. Yes love is the greatest gift of all for without it we would probably perish. Love is truly like the color of rainbow. It shines in and through our hearts. A very enlightening write.
With beautiful imagery that conveys your deep love so wonderfully expressed! !
Beautiful rhymes, love is the greatest gifts, not all can fell and see that, only artists can grow!
Beautiful poem, last stanza, so touching... loving you is the greatest gift..so lovely
the love is making the world going around as her love is great your song is great too
I love the images used. They shed light coming from the poet's soul towards his Beloved. Lovely thread! Keep being hopeful and inspired. Thanks a lot for sharing it. Best regards Maria
Loving her itself is a gift though the love briefly sparkling. But it is eternal.
It is not lost facing a range of obstacles. It is eternal. It splashes light briefly. A faint hope yet fills the soul to keep alive. The colourful silhouette vanishes soon. But loving her itself is a great gift. Am I right Mr. Adheez? Your poems are matured writes. The last line, a flash of your beautiful heart, is the theme of this poem. Excellent. *****
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7/30/2025 6:06:41 AM # 1.0.0
beautiful love poem so nicely presented