Friday, March 12, 2021

Room At The Top Comments

Rating: 5.0

I awakened to butterscotch sunshine, pouring through my window;
And I lay there for some moments, feeling the balmy wind blow.

I would have basked in it longer, save for a job that I enjoyed;
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
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Deluke Muwanigwa 13 March 2021

Lovely poem. A mix of reality and fantasy.

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Kostas Lagos 13 March 2021

You 've done a really good work with this poem Evelyn!

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Varsha M 12 March 2021

This is a beautiful poetic expression. So well penned. Full of hope and life. You gave a very lucrative insightful journey through the misfortune and bact to fortune on right track. This is beautiful. Thoroughly enjoyed.

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Captain Cur 12 March 2021

Entertaining and funny! There's only one lasting way to the top, but I would like to try to give that elevator a ride. I might get a sea worthy ship!

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