Friday, December 10, 2004

Ron Runs Here Comments

Rating: 4.3

mollify
light ignite
hunger moon
all is night
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Todd Garland
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Lenchen Elf 10 December 2004

Spartan and potent: -)

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Allan James Saywell 10 December 2004

Very good todd, you have done well, you enjoy doing this type of poem Makes us old fellow's think, that can only be good for us Regard's AJS

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Kelly Allen Vinal 10 December 2004

nice use of imagry - thanks

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