Ron Of The Cut Comments

I love this wry portrait! Your last line is a killer (in the nicest possible way!) I agree with Helen - keep up the good work of keeping us in the real world, Fran!

Love all of the characters in your 'cut' series, Fran. You paint some vivid pics here and they're livening up PH no end! HG: -) xx

Another excellent 'cut' poem, Ron of the cut who is half-cut, what a character, think I'll come to your cut for a look, love Lynda xx

Delightful. I was completely absorbed. Ez X

We're coming to feel at home with the cut.... loving this series. t x

RON THERE ARE MANY AT THE PH FORUM TOO.. ALL CUT OF FROM REAL LIFE MISS YOU MY DEAR FRANCESCA HAVE I OFFENDED YOU I AM MERELY HUMAN

Compassion and good humour underpin this engaging description. And Ron is a perfect name for him too. I've known a few Rons in my time and they all favour 'a taste'. You have penned your character with great precision and left an image that is clear and recognizable. Love the last line, too. Great poem. love, Allie xxxx

Fran, I like your description of Ron. I must ask is he real as he sound very much like it. Brilliant. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. David