I watch the cloudless night
And thought of you
How the stars shine as I stare
In the darkness, hoping you would appear
I breathe my last waiting for yr kiss
And when you finally did come
It was too late
You opened my glass coffin
And softly kiss me good-bye
There was no use in trying to revive me
I didn't feel a thing
So, you bit the poisonious apple
And breathe yr last
A terrific poem, recalling to mind the famed, hapless lovers.5 stars.
Thoroughly Shakespearean. Your poem provides us a glimpse of Shakespeare's play Romeo and Juliet which has a tragic end. Well penned my dear LeeAnn.
Cleverly weaved is this fantastic poem, dear LeeAnn. Top Marks for the poem and you. Enjoyed terribly. TFS
Well done, LeeAnn. One of Shakespeare's most tragic plays always brings tears,
Emotion not contained by the boundaries of life...and its aftermath. Brilliant verse, LeeAnn.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Is it must to die in love to become immortal? This world is very cruel specially for the lovers. Once again you testified it with this poem, Full *****