Romeo and Juliet
Loved each other much
But for their family's sake,
Kept out of touch.
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I am happy to read that Romeo and Julia have been living and loving each other though. I am mesmerized by your excellent ideas in the poem. Once again CONGRATULATIONS, dear Elena, I love you for being here. I am always supporting you, though you don´t see me often, but I know that you are here.Thank you for this most beautiful poem
The Time YOU won the Member Poem Of The Day, I was not active yet here. I did not know the way how to LOGIN to give responses. Indeed, Poem Hunter was for me a study apart to be well known with the rules. But I still wish to say CONGRATULATIONS to you, dear Elena. I am happy that you are on PH now.A sublimest poem, dear Elena!
Loving pairs are certainly victim of society but they are all alive till the creation of life. Thanks for sharing. Regards.
I missed it as Poem Of The Day, so Belated Congrats, Elena! I can readily see why you were bestowed such an honour. This is a very clever and innovative modern take on a tragic love story. Excellent write! Thoroughly enjoyed it from start to finish. Bravo tenfold! ! !
Beautiful love tale elegantly brought forth in good poetic diction with insight. A lovely piece indeed. Thanks for sharing.
Unfulfilled love! Vary common on earth. Thanks for sharing.
Love and pain! Comnon among mankind. Thanks for sharing.
Nice twist on an old classic. Good imagination. Congrats on poem of the day.
A touching poem and a wonderful imagination. Congratulations.
looks like a seed planted in a heart, not allowed to grow but then bursting out very interesting poem, Elena. Congrats with this poem of the day
So nicely composed- Romeo and Juliet, Loved each other much, But for their family's sake, Decided not to stay in touch. God bless you Elena
The philosophy attached with the saga of these immortal lovers has been beautifully captured and underlined in this poem. Great work. The following lines are just outstanding: But for their family's sake / Decided not to stay in touch /... Both try hard not to cry.
a few typos, but a very interesting story. i think i missed the part from when they were young and when they were old. i tend to agree with margaret alice's comment 'sentence': today I know the alternative of living a quiet little life is not necessarily better; life without quality is not much worth so I approve of the play - thanks for sharing. i liked your bio; IT seemed like some poems. nice. bri ;)
very nice poem...touching....you are surely a poet....plz read my 'dried red rose' u will like it.
I love your poems. I can't say exactly why, other than they touch me.
A very cleverly crafted and poignant write! Love it! 10+++ Hope you keep it up! Since you have what it takes to make into the Poetry World, talent! Love and Peace for always...
I cried as a child about Romeo and Juliet having to die, today I know the alternative of living a quiet little life is not necessarily better; life without quality is not much worth so I approve of the play - what I LOVED your using this depiction to tell hte story of love undying - thank you so much!
Addition: A 10 Full Score for this fantastic poem.