Romeo And Juliet Comments

Let me be the rhythm of the beat Rachel Ann Butler

Though brief, this is clearly one of your very best poems, Sulaiman. It is a very effective use of terse words and makes a single, simple yet universal statement. There are less than twenty words in this poem, a rarity for you, yet these few words provoke an encyclopedia of thoughts in all who read this fine poem. Carl.

Small but beautiful is the coz I add 10.

Concisely and very effectively put!

Short but packed full of love, nicely written by you, Lynda xx

Yes, that's it, that must be love, what a warm and carring poem. I love how you share feelings in just a few lines! Take care, Martine