He filled the ink of his pen
with tears that rolled down her cheeks
Touched the nib on her heart
to turn her sorrows into glee
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A very sweet little poem that touches the core of your heart. Wonderfully expressed Rini He started scribbling songs expressing his love and spilled the ink for us to read Specially, loved the last three lines. A huge 10 for you
Powerful imagination Rini..! The gathered ink touching the nib and subsequently turning the sorrows into glee... both Romeo and Juliet have been beautifully narrated in a subtle manner.. Loved your poem..!!
Tear is ink which touches the heart as nib. A beautiful metaphorical poem on love shared amazingly.10
superb and fantastic you so nice Dear
Thanks once again for visiting this poem Sairaj