Saturday, September 28, 2013

Romantic Torment Comments

Rating: 3.0

essence and colors of twilight
ceased my heart,
yet still I have looped
on your thinking, my darling
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Musfiq us shaleheen
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Aftab Alam Khursheed 06 November 2013

vivid imagery, well composed poem and after all confession is the heavenly thing we must confess thank

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Patricia Grantham 05 November 2013

Reminds me of a book that was called True Confessions. Just telling of ones problems and concerns can clear the mind and heart of clutter. Clean up everything so life can go on. Good.

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