Monday, January 11, 2016

Romantic Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

You are my whole on my trip,
I love to travel on your ship.

My hope is to reach that land,
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Abderrahmane Dakir
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M Asim Nehal 29 February 2016

Nice imagery, nice flow and lovely romantic poem....I missed some of your poems written this year....10++++

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Abderrahmane Dakir 29 February 2016

Thank you Mr. Asim for reading this poem.

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Sofia Kioroglou 15 February 2016

Love it! Beautiful poem

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Abderrahmane Dakir 15 February 2016

Thank you Sofia for reading.

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Akhtar Jawad 26 January 2016

So simple still beautiful and touching, a lovely poem.

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Abderrahmane Dakir 26 January 2016

Thank you for your lovely comment.

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Driss Ezzireg 25 January 2016

Lovely piece.So romantic.Thanks SI Abderrahmane.

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Abderrahmane Dakir 25 January 2016

Thank you so your lovely comment.

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Melvina Germain 18 January 2016

A delightful poem from the heart, love shines.....

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Abderrahmane Dakir 18 January 2016

Thank you for reading. You have a great feeling not only on writing but also on reading.

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