Saturday, March 24, 2007

Romantic Romeo Comments

Rating: 5.0

Melancholy heart wavers
Like a sinking ship
From inward disappointment
Of life plans crumbling
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Uriah Hamilton
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Claudia Fitzgerald 05 April 2007

Is the stare of a preoccupied professor really empty? Surely if he is preoccupied his mind is in fact very full of thoughts? A small comment about an otherwise interesting glimpse at the poet's worldview.

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Sandra Fowler 25 March 2007

Superb poem. Life as you see it from your own personal window on the world. Take care. Kindest regards, Sandra

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I was swooning at this, until I read the 'insignificant' bit. And you know how cross that made me that your wonderful self should even contemplate thinking such a thing... head and shoulders above any mere Romeo, you are. t x

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Oh Romeo! By a name, I know not how to tell thee how good a piece I think this is! Clair

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