Saturday, August 23, 2014

Romantic Recollection Comments

Rating: 4.3

A winsome youth, whose visage bore
A galaxy of pimples on the forehead,
Noticed a girl running ahead
While tramping up a country road.
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Chinedu Dike 08 September 2014

A lovely narrative. My favourite line is But how bloated with with meaning it is! that is the letter I. Thanks for sharing.

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Valsa George 02 September 2014

Really enjoyed this recollection gilded with romance! Yes, We can always identify that tug one feels on being attracted by another! Hope that girl who ran after her pet finally turned out to be the life time pet of that pimple faced boy! ‘I' is the slimmest letter in the Latin script of English, But how bloated with meaning it is! How true.......Love these lines! !

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Gajanan Mishra 23 August 2014

shared life-time, I like it, thanks.

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