Friday, October 17, 2014

Romantic Rain Comments

Rating: 5.0

It is raining today
I wish, by me you would stay
You would warm me down with your heat
I could lie on you, listening to your heart beat.
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Sneha Celine
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Akhtar Jawad 11 September 2022

A touching love poem, that's how we all feel in love.

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Michael Mcparland 21 October 2014

With your hope, determination, and knowledge of the love both of you hold for each other I know you will find what you seek. Such a heart warming piece of finding hope even in those times that seem so empty. Wonderful piece.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 17 October 2014

Nice and passionate feelings of love expressed beautifully.........very well composed.......I liked it.... thanks for sharing

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