Romantic Lie Comments
You told me once
My care is amazing
You enlightened me
My eyes are passionate
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A romantic lie....a beautiful excuse, to love and hate.......very vivid expressions....all too well executed! ! ! ! !
everything is fair in war and love, so goes the saying...
When I turned around Find your burning tears Dear, I’m back again To be with you forever Very touching words congrats sandhya
What a romantic poem......and a great title too......thanks. Merna
Wonderfully crafted. One would like to read again to sense the latent depth. I presume there's an unintentional satire hidden somewhere :) A tenner! !
the never ending charisma of romantic lies well captured through these fine lines.
Jaleel has festooned this ‘PoemHunter’ with a lovely poem once again. Every love and lover starts with ‘Romantic lies’ then eventually the lies come true. Jaleel’s writing is attractive and we expect more works for which we eagerly wait for. Thank you for your sharing Nooruddeen
When I turned around Find your burning tears Dear, I’m back again To be with you forever..... i loved the poem and ur opresentation too. u deserve 10 for ur poem read mine, Mom i miss you, inflamed mind and butterflies around.. comment
'I am aware now You entrapped me I want to find out A romantic lie to escape' This read so well...poetic. Your theme is very good and so is the write. Liked it very much.
When I turned around Find your burning tears Dear, I’m back again To be with you forever I really can feel the emotion behind these lines, 10+++
a lovely poem, so beautifully written, romantic lie ends romantically...
It is true people love to hear sweet lies told so well rather than hearing bitter truth. There is this saying, 'tell them what they want to hear not what they need to hear'. Romantically penned.
ya, ya ya, i go with ted M...romantic lies are comforting, ya that's it...becoz romantic lie is not really a LIE..its a naughty joke that was also stated in LG's commnt...i'll add some, romantic lies are some spoken but some are seen in actions..i dont know how to say this except ROMANTIC LIE is full of love..if am wrong, then am right, , , hehehehe, i dont lie ha...i lav this poem of yours..keep writing dearest dear...add more..your 2 poems are really nice, , , with other friends, welcome to this site...just invite me and never tell me that i lied or else i will be lying all the time..sssshhhh, , , sweet people are not liars dear, we should remember that, , naizz
Nice piece Jaleel....romantic lies as Ted says are often comforting too....10++
It reminds me of the song 'Tell me lies, Tell me sweet little lies, Tell me lies' from Fleetwood Mac. Sweet little lies comfort us and make us happy. Sometimes that might help even though U R taken for a ride; a sweet little ride. No loss anyway, except the depreciation of the heart. Nicely written Jaleel 10+++
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7/21/2025 10:27:29 AM # 1.0.0
beautiful poem i love it.10+++