Tuesday, December 11, 2018

Romantic Coroner. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lost in thought, I am disoriented
at the sight of you, at the sound of you.
"Dim the light, turn down the volume" I said.
Never to return to the home where you
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Carl Roussell
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Matthew Holloway 12 December 2018

i loved the title and the flow was brilliant, well penned deserving of a 10

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Carl Roussell 12 December 2018

Thank you, I am happy you liked the poem

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Aqua Flower 11 December 2018

A facinating write about lost love! I especially like the intensity in this piece and also the title chosen! Unique and well crafted write. 10!

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Carl Roussell 11 December 2018

Lost love can mess up your whole world, and the poem did start with the title. Thanks for the read and comment.

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Carl Roussell

Trenton, Ontario
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