Sunday, June 1, 2008

Romancing Reality Comments

Rating: 5.0

Short lived dream flits by,
Again.
Glimpsed fantastical dimensions,
Treacherous windows taunting me
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Steffi Webster
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Egal Bohen 01 June 2008

Steffi, I find this poem fascinating, leaving the reader tantalised, yet allowing them to use the gift of their own imagination to create the image in your message. Words are just labels used to portray situations and the skill is in the combination of how you use those words to convey a situation to the reader Sufficiently clear to get the message across but at the same time, sufficiently vague to provide for an element of personal interpretation. I think you have that skill Great read Sincerely Egal..

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