‘ROMANCE POINT’ [1]
esspeecee … [06.10.08.]
Questing the fragrance
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And nascent leaf blades Whispering- ‘tis is your ‘Romance Point’. Just 1 word ‘Romance-intensified’ Ten+++ WR
Romance flowering, fragrancing, humming, imbuing, dousing and so on… Soft in tone and tune. Ten+++
so humble but sparkling to shine in the rays of the sky....oh! let me see the sprinkling dew in the eyes that chew.....my vow of great respect to the poem like you....so special in every lines my lips murmur...thank you God less... a 10 +++++
Blind I’m To view, But will Find that fragrance Thro’ my Acute sense..many ways to enjoy the beauty and see the way poet has expressed happiness over fragrance left behind... very rich presentation of views without violating the modesty....10 read mine anywhere....butterflies around... love at first sight....
wow romance whispering in the air and on those 'nascent grass blades' -10 anjali
Very nice poem, romantic, coming from a wonderful soul.10+++++++
I reallly enjoy reading your poems. They succinct in words yet succulent in content.
i felt as if i wanted to experience this 'romance point' myself! freat write!
a surreal way of describing romance through the wonders of Nature..a 10 for this poetic wonder!
Happy I’m That grass carpet And nascent leaf blades Whispering- ‘tis is your ‘Romance Point’.' I really liked these lines sir.. you said it well.. nice indeed..10 with love shan
this poem shows romantic moment..the grass carpet and the leaf blades are the witnesses of the sweet moments..grace
That grass carpet And nascent leaf blades Whispering-............................ grin of green yet inebriates by dew love seems to wink by newness..................simply wonderful by the imagery expressing the passion of romance, ingenious flow, ....10++++++, thanks for sharing
And, this is your love. Nice work.