Sunday, October 23, 2011

Romance In A Satchel Comments

Rating: 5.0

How long more will a burgeoning affection
Be hidden from the prying eyes of men
How long more will I keep a princess
Holed up in the bottom of my bosom
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Chris Jibero
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Vipins Puthooran 26 October 2011

It's a wonderful poem, excellent poetic depiction penned with poignant write, Top marks! 10+++

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Ace Of Black Hearts 23 October 2011

The fear of failure isn't the same as the knowledge that it will for certain fail. If fear is your proof as you covey. Time is being wasted by your extended stay. Without any more duration in your delay I think their are somethings you must say. Please hurry and trust me it will be okay. For that pain you feel will wane. No matter if it is a rejection. The heart is still no longer being dissected. Great, Powerful, Emotional, Inspirational Poem. Keep up the such good writes.

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