Saturday, July 18, 2015

Romance Comments

Rating: 3.7

I said I love you.
Your hair is like spun silk.
Your eyes are like pools of water I want to dive into.
Your breast are like snow covered twin peaks in the Rockies.
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TIMOTHY KNIGHT HILL
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Kim Baker 23 August 2017

can't read anymore... johannax

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Roseann Shawiak 19 July 2015

Great poem Timothy, love, romance and the final put down, No finance, No romance. Love it, seems to be the precedent these days doesn't it? Your imagery is superb with a light rhythm. Keep writing! RoseAnn

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TIMOTHY KNIGHT HILL

TIMOTHY KNIGHT HILL

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