Friday, June 6, 2008

Roman Bath Day Comments

Rating: 3.2

In a roundabout fashion
propose if I may,
That today be a day
Of hedonistic conjecture.
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David DeSantis
COMMENTS
Ben Gieske 17 July 2008

Stupendous and what you say keeps ringing true. I wish your suggestion would be a solution to the world's sad state of affairs. At least it is worth trying.

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Catherine Rica Cosico 16 June 2008

A brilliant work of yours David....I gave you 10+ for this poem... Cate

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 14 June 2008

Wow, man. I would sy something but you said it all, what a creative mind on you my friend. A 10+ Loyd

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Original Unknown Girl 09 June 2008

Wow....... so what you're saying is if we all make love and not war then the whole world would be a happier place? Like it. Politically brilliant yet sardonic and witty at the same time. Pretty clever aren't ya? HG: -) xx

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Rema Prasanna 08 June 2008

It is brilliant David; I appreciate you for your brave true current reality of events; globe turns into a small tiny object on the tip of your pen, glad to read all those informative art work, efficiently crafted exceptional poem, a 10++++ for a great write.

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Onelia Avelar 07 June 2008

You put a perfect title on the top of the poem - you crowned with a laurel the body of the poem. The ancient Roman bath was the place of political and social discussions, often developing into other hedonistic pleasures. Interesting, witty, very well penned

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Michael Campbell 07 June 2008

hey i think you're on to some thing here Dave...and I like it. haha. great to read!

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Jurietta Duraan 07 June 2008

Excellent poem! Interesting that it is not necessarily the WOMAN who will rule, but ultimately SEX with her! I must admit that I have personally found this to be true! Ha-ha! love your stuff!

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Ivor Hogg 06 June 2008

Women have always been powers behind the scenes David I really enjoyed you Rant for to me thats what it was. It is said nations get the governments they deserve whic is probably the truth Apathhy rages unchecked and allows power seeker too much power

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Anita Atina 06 June 2008

O this is wicked! This is fun! I like your solution to a world undone!

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~ Jon London ~ 06 June 2008

Yes, Yes, Yes, Yes..........this is what I'm talking about bro...amazing piece well thought out brilliant composition.....Why oh why do we follow these leaders...we'll only end up facing a brick wall....more sense will be spoken from one........Outstanding is becoming my favourite word when it comes to your creations bro...................'10+ stacks of dishes Jon

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Broken Peaces 06 June 2008

David yes it did bring a smile to my face thankyou that was so well put together I sometimes wonder where our so called leaders are taking us and yet it is we that put them in power strange people arn't we 10 Chris

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