Thursday, October 29, 2015

Rolling Wheat Dough Comments

Rating: 5.0

To prepare dinner we are eager
Wheat flour is ready in this
With water mixed to dough
Now the rounds are ready
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Edward Kofi Louis 24 July 2016

Earnings are used in purpose. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 31 October 2015

Verily, as food is the energy for body, wisdom is the energy for soul.

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Loke Kok Yee 29 October 2015

excellent advice my friend.-10

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Ratnakar Mandlik 29 October 2015

Let us roll dough of wisdom Soon to make bread for mind And our spirits will be enlightened Getting this spiritual food. This concept takes the poem to a very different and higher philosophical level. Wonderful write. Enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.10+

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M Asim Nehal 29 October 2015

No-doubt that without food no one can survive and people argue why human body is made like this that it can not survive without food after few days....Yet another thought provoking poem.........liked it.Sir.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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