Wednesday, April 15, 2009

Rolling Past Comments

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Wheels roll over rust-run steel,
As they slip along the beaten tracks.

Reflections fly past, a blur,
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Graham Stone
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Diana Van Den Berg 24 April 2009

I beg to differ, Graham. In my humble opinion, you have a bond with that which you admire, and are therefore part of it, and not just another vacant space - though it makes for an excellent last line. I lived your thoughts throughout the poem. I also don't think nature was mocking you, but acknowledging you and your bond with it.

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