I don't like the carrolsell..
It just goes around
and up and down...
I need something new and fresh
...
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love it. you had a point here i can see. so, what did you mean you want just the enjoyment...... this is more than a poem. love it
The rollercoaster as a metaphore for life. Interesting. A ride in a rollercoaster is of course much more adventures and varied than the boaring going around in a carousel. According to Wikipedia the rollercoaster comes in many types and layouts like: 'the corcskrew, the twister, the wild mouse and the vertikal drop.
Well expresseed.nice poem.I really enjoyed.Thanks for sharing.
More than a poem? This is what poems are suppose to be...This is something worth writing, this is something worth reading. Good job Kate.