Friday, January 5, 2018

Roll With The Punches Comments

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Why don't you live with me and be my love?
Why can't we put behind our main constraint?
I voice in vain my tormenting complaint:
Mayhap I hope that it may make you move,
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Danny The Dreamer Boyd
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Bri Edwards 23 March 2018

(continued) ..........suicide should always be an 'option' available to people i think, but with counseling and a sober mind/body recommended beforehand. ah well, it is 'not acceptable' widely, i think. it IS pretty final.......maybe? to MyPoemList. bri :) ................................if one can manage to do it, rolling with the punches can be an acceptable alternative.........

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Bri Edwards 23 March 2018

who IS that handsome guy/gal in the 'photo'? not you, i dare say? the first and ninth lines 'ring a bell'! ha ha. your topics fit the poem nicely. i 'love' the alliteration: Or feeble feelings I just try to prove.— if your type of 'decorating' is represented by the seated figure, no wonder 'she/he' isn't interested! ! ! ! yikes! ! ! (to be continued) .......

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