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Another very significant write... your piece is a gem.. believe me redlepz... really great and meaningful... words are interesting...that builds this wonderful piece... A piece that speaks of God's creations 10+++ Lovelots, Maia

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it is very very beautiful lines fantastic poem lady grace

Well, this poem was well written nice flow... well done

It is very fine write.....i like this

lost gradually... as life goes on adulthood takes place more mature and responsible where ''you and i'' are found................in life u andme are foudto perform something new and praise worthy...sh....... all good.. u deserve....10 r ead mine.....what do i seek... what if tomorrow

You express so much within these golden lines ma-lady....it really is a beautiful composition my friend....10+++ all the way