Tuesday, June 20, 2017

Roja Roja … 2104-2k17 Comments

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Across the vastness of grand rift.
With his roja roja, Jimmy the swift.

We listened to music on our way.
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Yasmin Khan 29 May 2018

As usual your depiction of a scene is so gripping. I enjoyed it much.

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Akram Saqib 01 July 2017

excellent poem and wonderful expression

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Cigeng Zhang 29 June 2017

Your travelling experience became the muse for your writing. We Felt So Alive - yes, it may, in a trip, in poetry. I followed you in this chapter of journey, feeling joy and alive for the exotic nature and wildlife.

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Valsa George 28 June 2017

It must have been an exciting experience to have undertaken the South African jungle safari.... A thrilling start for the journey listening to the blaring music....! Viewing animals in their natural environs is a 'never forget' experience! You have succeeded in transferring the whole thrill of the expedition! A big 10

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Saadat Tahir 29 June 2017

Thanx dear valsa so kind...your encouragement makes me so happy.. :)

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