Across the vastness of grand rift.
With his roja roja, Jimmy the swift.
We listened to music on our way.
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Your travelling experience became the muse for your writing. We Felt So Alive - yes, it may, in a trip, in poetry. I followed you in this chapter of journey, feeling joy and alive for the exotic nature and wildlife.
It must have been an exciting experience to have undertaken the South African jungle safari.... A thrilling start for the journey listening to the blaring music....! Viewing animals in their natural environs is a 'never forget' experience! You have succeeded in transferring the whole thrill of the expedition! A big 10
As usual your depiction of a scene is so gripping. I enjoyed it much.