This is not a poem. It is a hidden-word puzzle. Hidden are 30 birds, all found in the Rocky Mountains of North America, with one exception.
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This is fun---I shall keep on till I find all of them---or I ask you on bended knee to have mercy on a silly goose like me ;)
I know it isn't a poem but I rated it a 5 because I enjoyed it and that is what art is to me. I grew up around the Rocky mountains so I found many of the birds in the puzzle. Now living in Florida and Brazil I am aware of many more that don't exist there. I love birds and I loved your piece.
You live in Florida and Brazil? What part of Brazil? I lived in Brazil for 50 months!
An excellent poem.Kim Barney is surely a bird lover and a great puzzle master.I tried and could hardly identify ten or twelve birds hidden int this word-forest.Congratulations Grace Diane and also others who came very close to solving the riddle.
Oops --- PH sent my comment before I was finished. Here are the three birds that Bri did NOT find: LARK [line 1], KESTREL [line 2], and PIPIT [line 1 of third paragraph].
Congratulations to Grace Diane Jessen, who finally found all 30 and sent me the names in a private message. Here are the three that Bri Edwards did NOT find:
Well, you've stumped me. I found 28 and 29 if you are counting dee for chickadee.
Nope, not counting DEE for CHICKADEE. So what have you found that Bri has not?
Bri has found these: kinglet, wren, heron, grouse, sapsucker, dipper, jay, ani, raven, emu, swan, killdeer, pigeon, osprey, kingfisher, teal, crane, flicker, owl, loon, hen, coot, grebe, snipe, mallard, eagle, nuthatch, warbler. The are still three more. Can anyone find them?
Kim, yes, Bri is correct. The ANI is a bird, but does not live in the Rocky Mountains. It is a member of the cuckoo family. Congrats, Bri! You found a bird that Kim didn't even know he had!
(cont.) AND, last but not least (not bittern) : kinglet, wren, heron, grouse, , sapsucker. I believe that IS 23, including ani and emu. Emus may be raised on farms for meat or feathers? ? ? bri ;)
(cont.) AND: dipper [ the slate-gray American Dipper is North America's only truly aquatic songbird. It flits among midstream rocks and logs],
I love that little American Dipper! I see them often when I am fishing one of my favorite streams, It actually dives under the water to get most of its food.
(cont.) AND: jay, ani ['Greater ani: Crotophaga major'], raven, emu, [ another not in Rocky Mountains, I say ], swan, killdeer, pigeon, osprey,
Ooh, this comment just popped up for me. It was not visible when I left 3 replies to your other comment. ANI was not one of my words. Congrats on finding one I did not hide, if it is a real bird, and I trust you that it is.
So seven more (not counting ANI, since it was not one of my 30) gives you 21 so far...
kingfisher, teal, crane, flicker, owl, loon, hen, coot, grebe, snipe, mallard, eaglet, [ 'aglet': The meaning of AGLET is the plain or point ], nuthatch, warbler,
Nice work, Bri. I only meant EAGLE instead of EAGLET, but either way works. Let's see, you got 12 so far. Only 18 more to go!
Oh, sorry, I overlooked the two you had after the [...], so you have 14 so far, and only 16 remaining to find.
The rest remains a puzzle though i can imagine some pretty birds......Top score
An interesting write with a beautiful picture of a bird, dear Poet Kim. Like Cowboy Ron says, i am able to identify only the one in picture.
The only one I can find is the one in the picture. That one is a downy woodpecker. I believe it is the smallest woodpecker in the USA.
I found 23, but the other 7 have eluded me so far. I waS WANting to do better!
I like look at the birds and discover what is hidden there!
Have fun, Rob!