Friday, December 1, 2017

Rocks That Fall Comments

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this sun,
this high ball of yellow
soon to stoop, but for now
it's the bladed cliff that's
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Jean Bernard Parr
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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 December 2017

Yellowness of sun attracts attention. Everything that moves downwards provoke thoughts. This is an amazing poem brilliantly penned.10

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John Parr 02 December 2017

Thank you Kumarmani. I have altered it since you read it. Best Regards

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Jean Bernard Parr

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