Wednesday, November 23, 2016

Rocks In My Head Comments

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Waking up this morning,
Felt like a load on my mind.
Feeling l got the world on my shoulders.
But my friend said that I'd problems the size of boulders.
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Ibrar Ahmad Siddiqi
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 24 November 2016

Wow a great impressive metaphor poem creatively thought up. The capsize part was esp nice. We all feel llike that sometimes so a freeverse on the topic was amazingly done by u poet. Pls do comment my latest poem too on Ashura.

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