Monday, December 12, 2016

Rocks Comments

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I climbed a rocky hill one day
To conquer each gradation
My will became the strongest way
To match determination
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Laurie Van Der Hart 11 March 2017

True! I just climbed up a rocky ridge yesterday. Always enjoy it and the view from up top is the best. Life's rocks are much harder than the literal ones. But you're right - if you conquer them the results are sweet. You might like to read Seamus O Brian's recent poem which is in a similar theme. Can't remember the title, but if you click most recently added it's sure to be near the top. Laurie

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Kim Barney 14 December 2016

The obstacles we face in life Are really building blocks So if your life is full of strife Go climb a hill of rocks! You have a talent for finding good endings for all your poems, at least all the ones I have read so far. Keep up the good work!

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