Saturday, September 19, 2009

Rocking In The Sun Comments

Rating: 4.0

It was not always like this
The soft creak of my caned back rocker
As I shift my weight,
Unburden myself
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Bob Bowers
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Jean Dament 19 September 2009

Although this poem is a sad lament it is well written & shows someone in alot of pain. Well done. Ravensong

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